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[What comes to mind when you hear the word \"change\"? ]
When I think of the word \'change\', \'passion\' and \'will\' come to mind.
Because we use the word when I revise or turn something to better.
It means we have a \'passion\' and \'will\' for a better situation.
So, not always, but I think the word \'change\' is a positive word.
Especially, when I write a journal paper with student, we often use the word.
We revise and change a lot of sentence and data to publish a better quality paper.
So, when I think the word, I thought papers the first.
We make a draft at first, then we revise and revise again to the final version what will be submitted to journals.
The change process is quite long and sometimes the final version is greatly different from the draft.
But I like the process and it makes me upgrade.
However, when I think of the work for the government or politics, \'concern\' or \'anxiety\' come to mind.
Maybe it is caused by the difficulty and scale which have influence for the society.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you so much for your thoughts here too! You know what they say; the only constant thing in this world is change. Some people are afraid of change. They stick to their old habits, beliefs and false practices. But there are people who embrace change and greatly learn form it. I would like to be the later! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I think of the word \'change\', \'passion\' and \'will\' come to mind.
>>CORRECT
Because we use the word when I revise or turn something to better.
Because we use the word when I revise or turn something to better.
>>Because we use the word when we revise or turn something to better.
It means we have a \'passion\' and \'will\' for a better situation.
It means we have a \'passion\' and \'will\' for a better situation.
>>CORRECT
So, not always, but I think the word \'change\' is a positive word.
So, not always, but I think the word \'change\' is a positive word.
>>CORRECT
Especially, when I write a journal paper with student, we often use the word.
Especially, when I write a journal paper with student, we often use the word.
>>Especially, when I write a journal paper with students, we often use the word.
We revise and change a lot of sentence and data to publish a better quality paper.
We revise and change a lot of sentence and data to publish a better quality paper.
>>We revise and change a lot of sentences and data to publish a better quality paper.
So, when I think the word, I thought papers the first.
So, when I think the word, I thought papers the first.
>>So when I think of the word, the first thing that comes to mind is \"papers\".
We make a draft at first, then we revise and revise again to the final version what will be submitted to journals.
We make a draft at first, then we revise and revise again to the final version what will be submitted to journals.
>>We make a draft at first, then we revise and revise it again until we reach the final version for submission.
The change process is quite long and sometimes the final version is greatly different from the draft.
The change process is quite long and sometimes the final version is greatly different from the draft.
>>CORRECT
But I like the process and it makes me upgrade.
But I like the process and it makes me upgrade.
>>But I like the process because it upgrades my knowledge and it improves me a lot.
However, when I think of the work for the government or politics, \'concern\' or \'anxiety\' come to mind.
However, when I think of the work for the government or politics, \'concern\' or \'anxiety\' come to mind.
>>CORRECT
Maybe it is caused by the difficulty and scale which have influence for the society.
Maybe it is caused by the difficulty and scale which have influence for the society.
>>Maybe it is caused by the difficulty and scale which has a great influence to the society.
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