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>> Music is a universal language. Do you agree or disagree?
Yes, i agree. I think music is common factor for connection in communicating with people. Language in lyric is different but we can feel same emotion listening to music and share our interest through music. So, music is a universal language. In case of me, I got to be closed with friends from vietam talking about K-POP. Common interest called music helped us relate to each other.
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>> Music is a universal language. Do you agree or disagree?
Yes, i agree. I think music is common factor for connection in communicating with people.
Yes, i agree. I think music is common factor for connection in communicating with people.
>> Yes, I agree. I think music is a common factor of connection in communicating with people.
Language in lyric is different but we can feel same emotion listening to music and share our interest through music.
>> The lyrics are different but we can feel the same emotion while listening to the music and share our interest through it.
So music is a universal language.
>> correct
In case of me, I got to be closed with friends from vietam talking about K-POP.
>> In my case, I developed a close friendship with some Vietnamese through our discussions about K-pop.
Common interest called music helped us relate to each other.
>> Our common interest in music helped us relate to each other.
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