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I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people. One neighbor is closest to me. When I came in the town with my family, I didn't know about this town. However one neighbor who is my coworker's family helped my family. They give us a lot of informations about the town. Also, when my children were sick, they took care of them while I worked in my office. I can't forget it. My husband and I invite them to join us for dinner. From then on, my family became really close to them. These days they are teaching my children in their academy.

Hello [이름] -   Thank you for taking the time to answer the essay topics. ^^ You opinion and thoughts are expressed clearly although there are a few hitches in the grammar but most of the corrections provide the better word for what you mean. I hope that you are having a great evening! I\'ll talk to you soon!     = Teacher Bella =     I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people. >> Correct! One neighbor is closest to me. >> One of my neighbors is very close to me. When I came in the town with my family, I didn\'t know about this town. >> When I came in this town with my family, I didn\'t know much about it. However one neighbor who is my coworker\'s family helped my family. >> Fortunately, I have a neighbor who happened to be my co worker helped us. They give us a lot of information about the town. >> Correct!Also, when my children were sick, they took care of them while I worked in my office. >> Correct!I can\'t forget it. >> Correct! >> OR: I\'m very thankful to have them as my neighbor. My husband and I invite them to join us for dinner. >> Correct! From then on, my family became really close to them. >> Correct! These days they are teaching my children in their academy. >> Correct! >> OR: They are currently teaching my children in their academy classes.