9/6 home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing those information about autumn sports festival. Anyway, I\'m so happy because I can feel the passion and eagerness which you give in our class. You\'re very eager to learn. I really admire that. Time management is very important. Learn to organize your schedule so you cna have more time to learn English. I know that you can do it! Have a great weekend! See you next week.
~t. KELLY~
On autumn season, Usually elimentary school open an autumn sports festival. such as relay race,soccer,play at a tug of war,etc.
>> In autumn season, elementary schools usually organize an autumn sports festival such as relay race, soccer, tug of war, etc.
They award to winner a prize of school things.
>> They give school supplies as an award to winners.
Individually,I really like reading korean history book on this season.
>> Correct
*** Proper nouns should start in capital letters: Korean
But, this year,I will study hard English with teacher Kelly.
>> But, this year,I will study English hard with teacher Kelly.
Something I to do is so much,but time is lack.
>> I have so many things to do but there\'s no much time.
>> Correct
Have a nice weekend! see you next Monday.bye!
>> Correct
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