9/6 home work

2013-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

On autumn season, Usually elimentary school open an autumn sports festival. such as relay race,soccer,play at a tug of war,etc. They award to winner a prize of school things. Individually,I really like reading korean history book on this season. But, this year,I will study hard English with teacher Kelly. Something I to do is so much,but time is lack. What should I do.sir? Have a nice weekend! see you next Monday.bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing those information about autumn sports festival. Anyway, I\'m so happy because I can feel the passion and eagerness which you give in our class. You\'re very eager to learn. I really admire that. Time management is very important. Learn to organize your schedule so you cna have more time to learn English. I know that you can do it! Have a great weekend! See you next week.

~t. KELLY~

On autumn season, Usually elimentary school open an autumn sports festival. such as relay race,soccer,play at a tug of war,etc.

>> In autumn season, elementary schools usually organize an autumn sports festival such as relay race, soccer, tug of war, etc.

They award to winner a prize of school things.

>> They give school supplies as an award to winners.

Individually,I really like reading korean history book on this season.

>> Correct

*** Proper nouns should start in capital letters: Korean

But, this year,I will study hard English with teacher Kelly.

>> But, this year,I will study English hard with teacher Kelly.

Something I to do is so much,but time is lack.

>> I have so many things to do but there\'s no much time.

What should I do.sir?

>> Correct

Have a nice weekend! see you next Monday.bye!

>> Correct

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