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I think it\'s important to eat complete meals everyday.
Most of the people tend to skip breakfast, because they consider sleeping is more important than eating breakfast.
In my case, I have adjusted eating breakfast since I was a child.
So, if I skip the meal, I feel hungry, and cannot focus on my work.
I think eating proper meals at time is good to get energy for doing something.
It is scientifically proved.
Brain use glucose as energy source, so, providing proper glucose from meals is important to make brain working actively.
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I think it\'s important to eat complete meals everyday.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
Most of the people tend to skip breakfast, because they consider sleeping is more important than eating breakfast.
>> Most people tend to skip breakfast because they consider sleeping as more important than eating breakfast.
In my case, I have adjusted eating breakfast since I was a child.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
So, if I skip the meal, I feel hungry, and cannot focus on my work.
>> So, If I skip meal, I feel hungry and I cannot focus on my work.
I think eating proper meals at time is good to get energy for doing something.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
It is scientifically proved.
>> It is scientifically proven.
Brain use glucose as energy source, so, providing proper glucose from meals is important to make brain working actively.
>> Brain uses glucose as energy source, so providing proper glucose from meals is important to make our brain work actively.
I think it\'s important to eat complete meals everyday.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
Most of the people tend to skip breakfast, because they consider sleeping is more important than eating breakfast.
>> Most people tend to skip breakfast because they consider sleeping as more important than eating breakfast.
In my case, I have adjusted eating breakfast since I was a child.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
So, if I skip the meal, I feel hungry, and cannot focus on my work.
>> So, If I skip meal, I feel hungry and I cannot focus on my work.
I think eating proper meals at time is good to get energy for doing something.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
It is scientifically proved.
>> It is scientifically proven.
Brain use glucose as energy source, so, providing proper glucose from meals is important to make brain working actively.
>> Brain uses glucose as energy source, so providing proper glucose from meals is important to make our brain work actively.
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