9/6 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework. Your consistency and dedication is remarkable. I appreciate your thoughts about this homework. We do really learned a lot from our elders and we thank them for their sacrifices. Let us not forget how they have lived but let us remember too how we should live our lives to the fullest! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

My grandfather and grandmother were passed away a few years ago.

>> My grandfather and grandmother passed away a few years ago.
I learned many good manner to elder people from them, because we have a respectful culture of elders.

>> I learned a lot of good manners from elderly people. Also, we have a respectful culture for elders.
But on the other hand, I realized many things about the life.

>> But on the other hand, I realized many things about life. 
They sacrificed their life for their family.

>> They sacrificed their lives for their family.
The people that live same period with my grand parents could not enjoy their own life, because they had to earn the money.

>> The people that lived the same period as with my grandparents did not enjoy their own lives because they had to earn money.  
When they passed away, I though the life is so short and empty dream.

>> When they passed away, I thought that life is so short, empty and with no dreams. 
So, I want to live for my own life.

>> So, I want to live my own life to the fullest.  
I think many young people think like it nowadays.

>> Correct