9/6 homework

2019-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What is something that will happen in the future that you are looking forward to?] I am very looking forward to being a professor who has a private laboratory and students. This is my one dream. I don\\\'t know it will be real when or where. But, I am working and studying for it. I think I am taking steps forward. I became a professor without tenure last year. I had three class for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation. I am teaching a class through English this semester. It is another first experience for me. It\\\'s very difficult to always enjoy every step to reach the goal or final dream situation. However, when I look back a few years later, it was a very clear and natural way. I hope to have such a day. And another thing looking for is my family with children. My husband and me, we don\\\'t have a baby now. But, we want to have children after I god the permanent job. So, this situation is naturally related to my first dream, like a happy ending of a fairy tale.

강사 첨삭

Wonderful thoughts on this one [이름]! Thank you for sharing aobut your future hopes and dreams. I hope they will all come true sooner than you thought! ^ ^
Good job with your sentences. Keep it up!  ^^
-Teacher Jedah 

I am very looking forward to being a professor who has a private laboratory and students.
>>CORRECT
This is my one dream.
>>CORRECT OR
>>This is my ultimate dream.
I don\\\'t know it will be real when or where.
>>I don\'t know when and where it will become real.
But, I am working and studying for it.
>>CORRECT
I think I am taking steps forward.
>>CORRECT
I became a professor without tenure last year.
>>CORRECT
I had three class for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation.
>>I had three classes for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation.
I am teaching a class through English this semester.
>>CORRECT
It is another first experience for me.
>>CORRECT
It\\\'s very difficult to always enjoy every step to reach the goal or final dream situation.
>>It\'s very difficult to find enjoyment in reaching your goal or achieving your final dream.
However, when I look back a few years later, it was a very clear and natural way.
>>However, when I look back a few years ago, it seems that it just happened recently and in a very natural way.
I hope to have such a day.
>>CORRECT
And another thing looking for is my family with children.
>>And another thing I am looking forward for is my family and with children.
My husband and me, we don\\\'t have a baby now.
>>CORRECT
But, we want to have children after I god the permanent job.
>>But, we want to have children after I get a permanent job.
So, this situation is naturally related to my first dream, like a happy ending of a fairy tale.
>>CORRECT

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