9/6 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What is something that will happen in the future that you are looking forward to?]
I am very looking forward to being a professor who has a private laboratory and students.
This is my one dream.
I don\\\'t know it will be real when or where.
But, I am working and studying for it.
I think I am taking steps forward.
I became a professor without tenure last year.
I had three class for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation.
I am teaching a class through English this semester.
It is another first experience for me.
It\\\'s very difficult to always enjoy every step to reach the goal or final dream situation.
However, when I look back a few years later, it was a very clear and natural way.
I hope to have such a day.
And another thing looking for is my family with children.
My husband and me, we don\\\'t have a baby now.
But, we want to have children after I god the permanent job.
So, this situation is naturally related to my first dream, like a happy ending of a fairy tale.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful thoughts on this one [이름]! Thank you for sharing aobut your future hopes and dreams. I hope they will all come true sooner than you thought! ^ ^
Good job with your sentences. Keep it up! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
This is my one dream.
This is my one dream.
>>CORRECT OR
>>This is my ultimate dream.
I don\\\'t know it will be real when or where.
I don\\\'t know it will be real when or where.
>>I don\'t know when and where it will become real.
But, I am working and studying for it.
But, I am working and studying for it.
>>CORRECT
I think I am taking steps forward.
>>CORRECT
I became a professor without tenure last year.
>>CORRECT
I became a professor without tenure last year.
>>CORRECT
I had three class for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation.
>>I had three classes for undergraduate students and I got a good evaluation.
I am teaching a class through English this semester.
I am teaching a class through English this semester.
>>CORRECT
It is another first experience for me.
It is another first experience for me.
>>CORRECT
It\\\'s very difficult to always enjoy every step to reach the goal or final dream situation.
It\\\'s very difficult to always enjoy every step to reach the goal or final dream situation.
>>It\'s very difficult to find enjoyment in reaching your goal or achieving your final dream.
However, when I look back a few years later, it was a very clear and natural way.
However, when I look back a few years later, it was a very clear and natural way.
>>However, when I look back a few years ago, it seems that it just happened recently and in a very natural way.
I hope to have such a day.
I hope to have such a day.
>>CORRECT
And another thing looking for is my family with children.
And another thing looking for is my family with children.
>>And another thing I am looking forward for is my family and with children.
My husband and me, we don\\\'t have a baby now.
My husband and me, we don\\\'t have a baby now.
>>CORRECT
But, we want to have children after I god the permanent job.
But, we want to have children after I god the permanent job.
>>But, we want to have children after I get a permanent job.
So, this situation is naturally related to my first dream, like a happy ending of a fairy tale.
So, this situation is naturally related to my first dream, like a happy ending of a fairy tale.
>>CORRECT
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