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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Happy Monday!
I\'m glad to see you had time to make your homework. Speaking English or other languages like Chinese, Spanish and others is good for our brain memory so whatever your children decide to learn is good. Have a great day! See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I really want it.
>> correct!
OR>> I really want that!
But many Korea company disagree it.
>> But many Korean company disagree with it.
In my co-worker case, she got a college degree but she can\'t speak English very well and she is afraid speaking English.
>> In my co-worker\'s case, she got a college degree but she can\'t speak English well and she is afrraid to speak English.
I want that my children can speak English very well also they learn another language in their life.
>> I want my children to speak English very well and to learn other languages too.
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