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2016-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I want to talk about during the week to spend time with my family. I am very busy during the week, so I usually spend time with my family on weekends. We usually prepare dinner together at home. My husband usually cooks instead of me and I usually wash the dishes. My children help us. They usually set the table for dinner. After dinner, we usually go jogging and walking.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!

Wow, what a perfect weekend with the family! Everybody is busy with work or school everyday that people often times the simple hings that can make us happy. I wish you could spend a long , happy life with your family! Have a great day! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I want to talk about during the week to spend time with my family.
>> I want to talk about how I spend the weekend with my family.
I am very busy during the week, so I usually spend time with my family on weekends.

>> correct!
We usually prepare dinner together at home.

>> correct!
My husband usually cooks instead of me and I usually wash the dishes.

>> correct!
My children help us. They usually set the table for dinner.

>> correct!
After dinner, we usually go jogging and walking.

>> correct!

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