9-7 homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: In today's world, how are animals suffering? What can we do to make sure animals rights are respected?
I think, The best way to respect animals is just love to animals. because If we love animals. we will respect animals naturaly. so love is the best way to respect animals.
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I think, The best way to respect animals is just love to animals. because If we love animals. we will respect animals naturaly. so love is the best way to respect animals.
>> I think, the best way to respect animal rights is to learn to love them. If we love animals, respect will naturally follow.
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