9/7 homework

2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What makes a good teacher?] I think sympathy makes a good teacher. This is more important that the educational knowledge. Teacher should check often students can understand class or what is difficulty to them. To study something, motivation is very important. The motivation is various according to the grade and environment. But, If we like teacher, we feel a little better about the study. This is not only for students, even adults also feel like it in academy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful composition. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this one. Indeed, I have to agree that students have the motivation to study if they are comfortable with their teacher and that the teacher has empathy and sympathy towards his/her students. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think sympathy makes a good teacher.

>> I think having sympathy makes a good teacher.
This is more important that the educational knowledge.

>>Correct
Teacher should check often students can understand class or what is difficulty to them.

>>Teachers should check their students often if they can understand the lessons or whether they are having difficulties.
To study something, motivation is very important.

>>Correct
The motivation is various according to the grade and environment.

>>Motivation varies according to the grade and environment.
But, If we like teacher, we feel a little better about the study.

>>But, if students like their teacher, they feel good about studying.
This is not only for students, even adults also feel like it in academy.

>>This is not only for students, even adults also feel like it in an academy.

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