9. 7 Homework

2018-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question briefly: Which is better, private school, public school, or home schooling. Discuss its pros and cons. I have been always a student of public school. I felt that many teachers of pubilic school don't have passion. They are paid by Country so they didn't think students seriously. If I have a child, I want to send the child to private school instead of public school. I'll be a teacher of public school someday but I will always try not to lose passion. I think students go to school to learn not only academical things but also relationship between friends so I don't like home schooling.

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I have been always a student of public school. I felt that many teachers of pubilic school don\'t have passion. They are paid by Country so they didn\'t think students seriously. If I have a child, I want to send the child to private school instead of public school. I\'ll be a teacher of public school someday but I will always try not to lose passion.
I think students go to school to learn not only academical things but also relationship between friends so I don\'t like home schooling.

I have been always a student of public school. I felt that many teachers of public schools don\'t have passion. They are paid by the government so they didn\'t think students seriously. If I have a child, I would want to send him to a private school instead of public. I\'ll be a teacher of public school someday but I will always try not to lose my passion. I think students go to school to learn not only academics but to socialize with people so I don\'t like home schooling.

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