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My eldest daughter has to hit the books because last week of April, she is going to the test in school.
Now I am anger because of her.
She is taking a shower for 1 hours.
I think it is very waste time.
When I take a shower, I just need short time.
She needs long time to study.
I can't understand her.
She doesn't spend time with smart.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Wow! you are even using idiomatic expressions now on your composition. Great job, Ms. [이름]! Don\'t get angry, you\'ll have wrinkles.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My eldest daughter has to hit the books because last week of April, she is going to the test in school.>> My eldest daughter has to hit the books because on the last week of April, she is going to have her test in school.
Now I am anger because of her.
Now I am anger because of her.
>> Now I am angry because of her.
She is taking a shower for 1 hours.
She is taking a shower for 1 hours.
>>She is taking a shower for one/an hour.
I think it is very waste time.
>> It is it\'s a waste of time.
When I take a shower, I just need short time.
When I take a shower, I just need short time.
>> When I take a shower, I just need a short time.
OR>> It takes me a few minutes to take a shower.
She needs long time to study.
She needs long time to study.
>> She needs a long time to study.
OR>> She needs to spend a lot of time for studying/reviewing her lessons.
I can\'t understand her.
I can\'t understand her.
>> correct!
She doesn\'t spend time with smart.
She doesn\'t spend time with smart.
>> She doesn\'t use her head sometimes.
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