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I think it will be a terrible experience.
I don't want to be alone despite a beautiful island.
If I am not alone there, I want to spend reading books and take a nap.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
You are correct, it would be a terrible experience.
They always say that \"No man is an island\" and I believe with this.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic! ^^
~Teacher Rain~
I think it will be a terrible experience.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t want to be alone despite a beautiful island.
>> I don\'t want to be alone despite living in a beautiful island.
If I am not alone there, I want to spend reading books and take a nap.
>> DID YOU MEAN: If I will be alone there, I will spend my time reading books and taking a nap.
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