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2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

학생이 쓴 원문

People visit fortune tellers for various different reasons. But I have never been experience. I would be some bad feeling about the future everyday. I do not want to be.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
People visit fortune tellers for various different reasons.
>> People visit fortune tellers for different reasons.
>> People visit fortune tellers for various reasons.
But I have never been experience.
>> But I have never experienced one.
I would be some bad feeling about the future everyday.
>> I will feel anxious knowing my future everyday.
I do not want to be.
>> I don\'t want that to happen.

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