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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름],
Health is wealth. Money is nothing if you are sick. You can\'t enjoy it. I hope you\'ll really win the lottery. If that happens, invite me to Korea and let\'s party. That would be a blast!(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
If I won the lottery, I first will check up my health with my family.
>> If I win the lottery, I\'ll go for a check up with my family.
It is very important.
>> correct!
We can buy our health so we have to keep our health in shape when we are in good health.
>> We can\'t buy health so we have to keep our bodies in shape while we are in good health.
And then I will buy a building.
>> correct!
I want to be owner the building.
>> I want to own a building.
OR>> I want to be a building owner.
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