9.8 Homework

2015-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good afternoon! Did you have a good lunch? I've just eaten lunch. I had a long meeting this morning. Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer and why? The weather in Korea is various and enjoyable. We can enjoy skiing and swimming thanks to various weather. We have been living in the four seasons such as spring, summer, autumn and witer. I think that changing of the season gives us more energetic and fun. so I can think of Korea as being fun and enjoyable country because of changing of the season. I prefer to live in areas where the weather changed several times a year. I like Korea. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! I hope that you had a great lunch, too. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework despite your hectic schedule today. You are indeed lucky because you can experience four seasons in a year. Among the four seasons, which is your favorite?^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon! >> Correct.Did you have a good lunch? >> Correct. I\'ve just eaten lunch. >> Correct. I had a long meeting this morning. >> Correct.Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer and why?The weather in Korea is various and enjoyable. >> There are differebt types of weather in Korea and it\'s enjoyable. We can enjoy skiing and swimming thanks to various weather. >>  We can enjoy skiing and swimming because of it. We have been living in the four seasons such as spring, summer, autumn and witer. >> We have been living here with four seasons such as spring, summer, autumn and winter. I think that changing of the season gives us more energetic and fun. >> I think that the different seasons give us more energy and fun. so I can think of Korea as being fun and enjoyable country because of changing of the season. >> so I can think of Korea as being fun and enjoyable country because of it. I prefer to live in areas where the weather changed several times a year. >> I prefer to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year.I like Korea. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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