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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: How would you like artificial intelligence to help you?
I don't want to improve about artificial intelligence technology. because, I think artificial intelligence is very dangerous to human. If machines are able to think like human. They will do alot of crime and The worst way they can be overstride human so they rule human. so I don't want to develop the artificial intelligence technology.
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Good evening, [이름]!
Happy Monday! :)
Well, AI (artificail intelligence) has it\'s advantage and disadvantage.
But just like you, I don\'t want it to rule over our lives.
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
You did good. I just made some modification for you to review later on.
_T. Mayleen ^^
I don\'t want to improve about artificial intelligence technology. because, I think artificial intelligence is very dangerous to human.
>> I don\'t want artificial intelligence to be improved because I think it is very dangerous to human.
If machines are able to think like human. They will do alot of crime and The worst way they can be overstride human so they rule human. so I don\'t want to develop the artificial intelligence technology.
>> If machines are able to think like humans, they might do a lot of bad things and harm people so I\'m against the development of artificial intelligence.
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