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학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: Why do you like going to amusement [이름]s?
I like going to amusement [이름]s.
Because I like beautiful performouse and festival,and I like take many rides,too.
And I like see a parades.
So, I like going to amusement [이름].
강사 첨삭
Good morning, my dear [이름]!^^
I think that you really enjoyed your rides in the amusement [이름].^^ Anyway, please keep up the nice work and continue practicing!^^
Always,
~t. Kelly^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: Why do you like going to amusement [이름]s?
I like going to amusement [이름]s.
>> Correct.
Because I like beautiful performouse and festival,and I like take many rides,too.
>> Because I like watching beautiful performances and festivals. I like taking many rides, too.
And I like see a parades.
>> And I like to watch parades.
So, I like going to amusement [이름].
>> So, I like going to amusement [이름]s.
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