90. Homework

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ESSAY: It is observed that in many countries, not enough students are choosing to study Science. What are the possible causes and what will be its effects on the society?
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First, children don’t like to study mathematics and sciences rather than histories and languages.

>>First, children don’t like to study Mathematics and sciences rather than History and languages.

That’s the reason why most high school students choose studying humanities when they needed to select between humanities and natural science.
>>That’s the reason why most high school students choose to study humanities when they needed to select between Humanities and Natural Science.
Second, most people who studies science becomes an engineer among doctor, engineer, and scientist.

>>Second, most people who study Science becomes an engineer or doctor, engineer, and scientist.
Only few people become a doctor and scientist.

>>Only few people become a doctor or a scientist.

 And more than 50 percent of engineers work at site rather than working in the office.

>> And more than 50 percent of engineers work at site rather than in the office.

 Nowadays, people prefer to work at the office, which we called them white color, since they don’t want to get physical stress.
>> Nowadays, people prefer to work at the office, which we call white collar job, since they don’t want to get physical stress.
Third, although engineers make money from other countries or companies, it might be divided with HR and Finance teams equally.

>>Third, although engineers make money from other countries or companies, it might be divided with HR and finance teams equally.

Furthermore, even if an engineer or scientist invents some goods, those will be controlled under company and patent which is made by a person who works for HR.

>>Furthermore, even if an engineer or a scientist invents some goods, those will be controlled under company and patent which is made by a person who works for HR.

Hence, they will not get any additional and compensations from their inventions.

>>Hence, they will not get any additional compensation for their inventions.
 I think these kinds of cultures have been making phenomenon which avoids studying for major of natural science.

>> I think these kinds of cultures have been making a phenomenon which avoids students from studying Natural Sciences.

And technical development will be being slowly.

>>As a result, technical development will move slowly.

 However, some part of views, it also good for natures since humans will not make goods anymore giving natures damaged.

>> However, it partly good for nature since humans will not make goods anymore resulting to its damage.

Even if technology will not develop anymore, I think it also okay since we are able to live comfortable with the nowadays machine and technology. 

>>Even if technology does not develop anymore, I think it also okay since we are able to live comfortably with the machine and technology nowadays.