9th August

2011-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

I previously] had a worry about other people getting me wrong. At that time, I couldn’t know the why. Eventhough I don’t know it exactly still now, I'm not sure but guessing that. The key point is, "We are not wrong but different." When I was young, I couldn’t understand this truth. As I'm getting the old, I can know what is the meaning. That is the wiseness of the elder generation. I also couldn’t understand their choice and decision. But, After I experienced the case, I know why they say so at the moment.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It's good to read that you understand something from the topic and you actually learn from it. Keep it up! See you tomorrow! T.Faye   Here are your corrections: I previously] had a worry about other people getting me wrong. >>I was worried about other people getting me wrong.At that time, I couldn’t know the why. >>At that time, I didn't know why.Eventhough I don’t know it exactly still now, I'm not sure but guessing that. >>Eventhough I don't exactly know it till now, I'm just guessing.The key point is, "We are not wrong but different." >>Correct!When I was young, I couldn’t understand this truth. >>When I was young, I couldn't understand it.As I'm getting the old, I can know what is the meaning. >>I only understand it now that Iam growing old.That is the wiseness of the elder generation. >>That's why the elder generation is wiser.I also couldn't understand their choice and decision. >>Correct!But, After I experienced the case, I know why they say so at the moment. >>Correct!

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