9th August
학생이 쓴 원문
I previously] had a worry about other people getting me wrong.
At that time, I couldn’t know the why.
Eventhough I don’t know it exactly still now, I'm not sure but guessing that.
The key point is, "We are not wrong but different."
When I was young, I couldn’t understand this truth.
As I'm getting the old, I can know what is the meaning.
That is the wiseness of the elder generation.
I also couldn’t understand their choice and decision.
But, After I experienced the case, I know why they say so at the moment.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It's good to read that you understand something from the topic and you actually learn from it. Keep it up! See you tomorrow!
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
I previously] had a worry about other people getting me wrong.
>>I was worried about other people getting me wrong.At that time, I couldn’t know the why.
>>At that time, I didn't know why.Eventhough I don’t know it exactly still now, I'm not sure but guessing that.
>>Eventhough I don't exactly know it till now, I'm just guessing.The key point is, "We are not wrong but different."
>>Correct!When I was young, I couldn’t understand this truth.
>>When I was young, I couldn't understand it.As I'm getting the old, I can know what is the meaning.
>>I only understand it now that Iam growing old.That is the wiseness of the elder generation.
>>That's why the elder generation is wiser.I also couldn't understand their choice and decision.
>>Correct!But, After I experienced the case, I know why they say so at the moment.
>>Correct!
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