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These days my mind is so complicated.
What's the reason? I think that I'm looking for my real value about my life. But it's not easy to find the correct answer about that.
I have consulted with my coworkers and my friends about that several times. But to be honest with u, I don’t know evnethough what is my value. It's very difficult. But it's very important to us and to me.
I'm already 36years old. I have to get the responsibility for my family's life. So I try to find it out by this year. And then i will plan or draw blueprint about my life. I wanna live happily.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름].^^ That is a very big dilemma. I for one, do not know how to answer you. I think, the value of a person can be found deep within. Look inside your heart and ask yourself what are the things that make you worthy being a person, what makes you happy, what do you like doing, and a lot more questions focusing on yourself. Having some time for yourself and doing self-reflection could be helpful.... AND I hope, you will find the answer to your question very soon. ^^
These days my mind is so complicated.
>> CORRECT!What's the reason? I think that I'm looking for my real value about my life. But it's not easy to find the correct answer about that.>> What's the reason? I think that I'm looking for my real value in my life. But it's not easy to find the correct answer to that.I have consulted with my coworkers and my friends about that several times. But to be honest with u, I don’t know evnethough what is my value. It's very difficult. But it's very important to us and to me.
>> I have consulted my co-workers and my friends for several times. But to be honest with you, I don't know what is my value. It's very difficult. But it's very important to you and me.I'm already 36years old. I have to get the responsibility for my family's life. So I try to find it out by this year. And then i will plan or draw blueprint about my life. I wanna live happily.
>> I'm already 36 years old. I have to be responsible for my family's life. So, I will try to find it out this year. And then, I will plan or draw a blue print about my life. I wanna live happily.
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