9TH , june, 2010

Good morning. lei.~ it's a clear and sunny wednesday. is there hot? from this week, it became more warm and warm as day pass. yesterday, on the way home, i decided to cut my hair. so i went to hair shop. and cut my hair. but nobody recognized that i've cut my hair. because it didn't change a lot. just the lenghth of my hair is shorter than before. Today is historical day in Korea. we are going to inject the satelite into its orbit afternoon today. we tried it last year. but unfortunately, there was some mistake. so it blasted off, but failed to enter into the orbit. the scientists completed the problem and finally today. it is going to blast off again.

Hello [이름]!! 

Thanks for writing. Wow I hope that you felt better after the hair cut. Oh, yeah I heard about your historical day. Well I hope that you have a good time with that and I will see you again tomorrow!!

 

Good morning Lei~ it”s a clear and sunny Wednesday.

>>Good morning Lei,  it's a clear and sunny Wednesday.

Is there hot? From this week, it became more and more warm as day pass.

>>Is it hot there this week?

>>It became warmer as the days have passed.

Yesterday on the way home, I decided to cut my hair.

>>on my way home yesterday, I decided to cut my hair.

So I went to hair shop, and cut my hair.U

>>So I went to the hair shop and had my hair cut.

But nobody recognized that i’ve cut my hair.

>>But nobody recognized that i've had my hair cut.

Because it didn’t change a lot.

>>correct

>>Because my hair didn't change a lot. (better)

Just the lenghth of my hair is shorter than before.

>>the length of my hair is shorter than before.

  Today is historical day in Korea.

>>Today is a historical day in Korea.

We are going to inject the satellite into its orbet afternoon today.

>>We are going to launch a satellite into its orbit this afternoon.

We tried it last year.

>>We tried to do it last year.

But unfortunately, there was some mistake.

>>correct

>>But unfortunately, it was not successful

so it blasted off, b ut failed to enter into the orbit.

>>It blasted off but it failed to enter the orbit.

the scientists completed the problem and finally today it is going to blast off again

>>The scientists have solved the problem and today finally its going to blast off again.