A bad lifestyle

2017-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Before getting married, I was a punctual person. I kept my promise even to myself. But now I cannot control my schedule myself I still keep my promise to others though. I don't think I use my time wisely, if I don't have any job. When I went to work, I had to follow the rules of the company so it was not possible to waste my time. I don't know if it is good to set my time by the rules of a company, not myself. However, I had a limited time for myself when going to work so I thought seriously about how to structure my time effectively which was a good thing. Since quitting my job, I have been having much time for myself. Because I got unlimited time for myself , I became lazy so I put off my work today to tomorrow. I do not even know what I can do well because I have such a bad lifestyle at this moment and I know it is hard to fix it. Someond said to me if I wanted to change something, I have to begin changing a thing. Yes, I will try to take small actions for changing and never stop trying it until I become what I wanted to be.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thanks for writing this. I really appreciate your effort. See you on Friday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Before getting married, I was a punctual person.

>>> Correct!

I kept my promise even to myself.

>>> Correct!

But now I cannot control my schedule myself I still keep my promise to others though.

>>> But now I cannot control my schedule but I still keep my promise to others though.

I don\'t think I use my time wisely, if I don\'t have any job.

>>> I don\'t think I use my time wisely now that I don\'t have a job.

When I went to work, I had to follow the rules of the company so it was not possible to waste my time.

>>> Correct!

I don\'t know if it is good to set my time by the rules of a company, not myself.

>>> Correct!

However, I had a limited time for myself when going to work so I thought seriously about how to structure my time effectively which was a good thing.

>>> Correct!

Since quitting my job, I have been having much time for myself.

>>> Correct!

Because I got unlimited time for myself , I became lazy so I put off my work today to tomorrow.

>>> Correct!

I do not even know what I can do well because I have such a bad lifestyle at this moment and I know it is hard to fix it.

>>> Correct!

Someond said to me if I wanted to change something, I have to begin changing a thing.

>>> Someone told me that if I want to change something, I have to begin changing a thing.

Yes, I will try to take small actions for changing and never stop trying it until I become what I wanted to be.

>>> Yes, I will try to take small steps to make a change and never stop trying until I become what I really want to be.

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