a beautiful woman.

2010-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I told you one hour before. I met my boyfriend's friend and his girlfriend with my boyfriend. In a nutshell, we had a double date. You know double date is usally joyful event. But I was little edgy that time because of her who is my boyfriend's friend's a girlfriend. I heard about her who is a nurse officer, newly promoted captain. Her boyfriend is a captain too. So I imagined her as a being tanned tough girl. oh my! she was a beautiful girl dressed up with CHANEL. Although I am older than her I felt smaller than her. I tried as if I was okay. When I put food on a plate at salard bar my boyfriend whispered to me. "you are more pretty than her." I was moved by his careful concern.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Your boyfriend is so sweet,. He has such a good way to make you feel comfortable. He means that you are the most beautiful girl in his eyes so you don?need to feel insecure against other women. You are so lucky to have a boyfriend like him. Cheer up!!! See you on Wednesday!!! Lei J I told you one hour before.>>correctI met my boyfriend's friend and his girlfriend with my boyfriend.>>correctIn a nutshell, we had a double date.>>correctYou know double date is usally a joyful event.>>correctBut I was little edgy that time because of her who is my boyfriend's friend's a girlfriend.>>correct >>But I was a little  edgy during that time because of the girl.I heard about her who is a nurse officer, newly promoted captain.>>I heard that she is a nurse officer and she just got promoted as a captainHer boyfriend is a captain too.>>correctSo I imagined her as a being tanned tough girl.>>So I imagined her to be a tan, tough girl.oh my! she was a beautiful girl dressed up with CHANEL.>>Oh my!!! She was a beautiful girl who was dressed up in Chanel.Although I am older than her I felt smaller than her.>>correctI tried as if I was okay.>>correctWhen I put food on a plate at salard bar my boyfriend whispered to me.>>correct"you are more pretty than her.">>correctI was moved by his careful concern. >>correct

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