A best friend is like a four leaf clover, hard to find, lucky to have.
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Hi there sir [이름]!(\",)
I understand what you mean. I have many acquaintances but I think I have only three best friends. The first one I met in high school, the second in college and the third in my previous company. The sad thing is I\'ve lost touched with them over the years so I don\'t know if they still consider me their best friend just I like I do with them.
~T. Lynn
Yes, To find a best friend is hard. I am not sure if I have a best friend.
>> correct!
I thought that I had quite a lot of best friends, but I don\'t know who my best friend is now.
>> correct!
As getting older, I feel like losing my close friend.
>> As I am getting older, I feel like I\'m losing my close friends.
I have tried to travel with friends who shared everything when I was young.
>> I have tried to travel with friends who I had the same interest with when I was young.
We thought we can play same things as we did before, but it was not possible.
>> We though we can play the same things as we did before but it was not possible.
Everything have changed few years later. Some already got married, others have wives or girlfriends.
>> correct!
There was few chance to meet together and then we might feel a little bit awkward.
>> There were few chances to meet and so we might feel a little bit awkward.
The best friend means a person who can share all the things that I have in my mind.
>> Best friend means a person who can share all the things that I have in mind.
I think family is the best friend for me and there is nothing better than them.
>> I think my family is my best friend and there is nothing better than them.
We don\'t have to try to find lucky things. If we try to find luck, we might lose our happiness.
>> correct!
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