A Big News
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw a big new which is North Korea and the United States summit.
I hope the Korean Peninsula is coming peace.
But North Korea tend to trick South Korea & US.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Daniel! ^^,)
Happy Wednesday! It\'s your local election day. Have you voted?
Thank you for this composition. I saw some photos of the summit online.
Hopefully, it\'ll lead to something good.
See you later in class!
_T. Mayleen :)
I saw a big new which is North Korea and the United States summit.
>>> I saw the big news on TV about the summit/meeting between North Korea and the United States.
I hope the Korean Peninsula is coming peace.
>>> I hope the Korean peninsula will finally find peace.
But North Korea tend to trick South Korea & US.
>>> However, I think North Korea tends to trick South Korea and the US.
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