a blind date
학생이 쓴 원문
The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to the blind-date.
He is my friend’s friend.
My friend told me that he is very handsome and almost 180cm tall.
Moreover, he is smart and rich!!!
If it is true, it would be great.
However, I can’t trust my friend’s introduction actually.
I have experienced some blind-dates, but they were not good.
They were really different from my friends’ introductions.
I already knew how useless blind date is, however, I expect it again.
I hope that kind and handsome person will come to the blind date.
강사 첨삭
My dear Min Joo,
I hope that you friend gave the right idea of the person you’re going to date. Just don’t expect too much so you won’t be disappointed big time.
Good luck!
Faye~~
The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to the blind-date.
>> The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to go to a blind-date.He is my friend’s friend.
>>Correct^^My friend told me that he is very handsome and almost 180cm tall.
>>Correct^^Moreover, he is smart and rich!!!
>>Correct^^ ha haIf it is true, it would be great.
>>Correct^^However, I can’t trust my friend’s introduction actually.
>>However, I can’t trust friend’s idea in introducing me.I have experienced some blind-dates, but they were not good.
>>Correct^^They were really different from my friends’ introductions.
>>Correct^^I already knew how useless blind date is
>> Correct
, however, I expect it again.
>>However, I’m going to have one again.I hope that kind and handsome person will come to the blind date.
>>Correct^^
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