a blind date

2011-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to the blind-date. He is my friend’s friend. My friend told me that he is very handsome and almost 180cm tall. Moreover, he is smart and rich!!! If it is true, it would be great. However, I can’t trust my friend’s introduction actually. I have experienced some blind-dates, but they were not good. They were really different from my friends’ introductions. I already knew how useless blind date is, however, I expect it again. I hope that kind and handsome person will come to the blind date.

강사 첨삭

My dear Min Joo, I hope that you friend gave the right idea of the person you’re going to date. Just don’t expect too much so you won’t be disappointed big time. Good luck! Faye~~   The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to the blind-date. >> The day after tomorrow, I have a plan to go to a blind-date.He is my friend’s friend. >>Correct^^My friend told me that he is very handsome and almost 180cm tall. >>Correct^^Moreover, he is smart and rich!!! >>Correct^^ ha haIf it is true, it would be great. >>Correct^^However, I can’t trust my friend’s introduction actually. >>However, I can’t trust friend’s idea in introducing me.I have experienced some blind-dates, but they were not good. >>Correct^^They were really different from my friends’ introductions. >>Correct^^I already knew how useless blind date is >> Correct , however, I expect it again. >>However, I’m going to have one again.I hope that kind and handsome person will come to the blind date. >>Correct^^  

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