A bone of contention.

2010-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Do you know Dok-do. it's a bone of contention between Korea and Japan. it's a island which located at the eastern sea. Japan is located at our easter side. Japan insists about Dok-do is Japans' own. it's not true. we have evidences at our historical book. more over 1,000 years ago, Korea gorvened the island and also we draw the island at our map since 1,000 years ago. Do you know this? Korea was a colony for 35 years. Japan repressed Korea and also they killed our queen for their purpose. due to Dok do has lots of worth, Japan insisted it's theres' since 1905. they are so rudly and even like a theft. Korean have resentment about Japans' behavior.

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Hi [이름]!! Wow I am really impressed. I am giving you idioms everyday and I am so glad that you are actually checking it and trying to associate it with your composition. I didn’t know about Dok-do island. We have the same case here in the Philippines. Anyways, let’s talk about this later during our class. Lei J   Do you know Dok-do. >>correct it's a bone of contention between Korea and Japan. >>correct it's a island which located at the eastern sea. >>it’s an island which is located at the eastern sea. Japan is located at our easter side. >> Japan is located at the east side of South Korea Japan insists about Dok-do is Japans' own. >>Japan insists that Dok-do is part of their country it's not true. >>correct we have evidences at our historical book. >>correct more over 1,000 years ago, Korea gorvened the island and also we draw the island at our map since 1,000 years ago. >>more than 1,000 years ago, Korea governed the island and also we draw the island at our map more than 1000 years ago Do you know this? >>correct Korea was a colony for 35 years. >>Korea was colonized for 35 years Japan repressed Korea and also they killed our queen for their purpose. >> Japan repressed Korea and also they killed our queen on purpose due to Dok do has lots of worth, >>because Dok-do is very valuable Japan insisted it's theres' since 1905. >>correct they are so rudly and even like a theft. >>they are so rude and acts like a thief Korean have resentment about Japans' behavior. >>Korea has resentments about Japans' behavior.

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