A book club.
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I want you to focus on verb tenses.
Remember that you have to use the simple past form of the verb when you\'re telling a story.
These are actions that have already happened.
Be careful of your choice of words.
I know you can do it better.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Actually, I haven’t joined a book club.
>> Correct
This is because I didn’t like to read books few years ago.
>> This is because I didn’t like to read books years ago.
When I was a 19 years old, I realize the joy of reading.
>> When I was 19 years old, I realized the joy of reading.
After that, i try to read a book at least once a month.
>> After that, I tried reading a book at least once a month.
It’s difficult at the moment, but i really want to read a book.
>> It’s difficult at the moment but I really want to read a book.
As i can learn and experience many things by reading book.
>> This is because I can learn and experience many things by reading book.
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