A bread taht gather mold
학생이 쓴 원문
Title: < A bread that gather mold>
I like somewhere warm.
I like somewhere humid.
I was born as spore.
There are spores at anywhere.
With some water and nutrients then you can see me.
Do you know who am I?
Yes, I'm a mold.
Oh, there is a delicious bread.
The bread is my favorite food.
Yummy! yummy!
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Very nice article today! I enjoyed reading this poem about bread and molds. Is bread really your favorite food? I would like to know more about this topic in our class. Have a great Monday! Stay sweet my dear.
I like somewhere warm.
>> Correct
I like somewhere humid.
>> Correct
I was born as spore.
>> Correct
There are spores at anywhere.
>> There are spores anywhere.
With some water and nutrients then you can see me.
>> With some water and nutrients, then you can see me.
Do you know who am I?
>> Correct
Yes, I'm a mold.
>> Correct
Oh, there is a delicious bread.
>> Correct
The bread is my favorite food.
>>Bread is my favorite food.
Yummy! yummy!
>> Correct
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