A bread taht gather mold

2011-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Title: < A bread that gather mold> I like somewhere warm. I like somewhere humid. I was born as spore. There are spores at anywhere. With some water and nutrients then you can see me. Do you know who am I? Yes, I'm a mold. Oh, there is a delicious bread. The bread is my favorite food. Yummy! yummy!

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Very nice article today! I enjoyed reading this poem about bread and molds. Is bread really your favorite food? I would like to know more about this topic in our class. Have a great Monday! Stay sweet my dear. I like somewhere warm. >> Correct I like somewhere humid. >> Correct I was born as spore. >> Correct There are spores at anywhere. >> There are spores anywhere. With some water and nutrients then you can see me. >> With some water and nutrients, then you can see me. Do you know who am I?  >> Correct Yes, I'm a mold. >> Correct Oh, there is a delicious bread. >> Correct The bread is my favorite food. >>Bread is my favorite food. Yummy! yummy! >> Correct    

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