A bullet train made with Korean technique has some

A bullet train made with Korean own technique has some problems that are unknown. So, during running the train, suddenly it stoppted in the middle of the long tunnel. In addition, it didn't make the schedule so that the CEO of Korail, the Korean trail corporation, asked passengers to trasfer to incoming train for safety. This is increasing the doubts that they will not be able to get the project which is about construting new bullet trains in the US or Brazil. However, the manager of getting the projecting said they are confident to make it since they can get trust opening their weakness instead of hiding it. My concern is that they are still running the trains so far.

Hello [이름], Nice work on writing about the bullet train, but there were some problems oyu made in your composition. You can check the corrections I made for you here. Talk to you later. -RJ-   A bullet train made with Korean own technique has some problems that are unknown. >>A bullet train made with Korean technology has some problems that are unknown. So, during running the train, suddenly it stoppted in the middle of the long tunnel. >>So, during the test run of the train, it suddenly stoppted in the middle of a long tunnel. In addition, it didn't make the schedule so that the CEO of Korail, the Korean trail corporation, asked passengers to trasfer to incoming train for safety. >>In addition, it didn't make the schedule so the CEO of Korail, the Korean trail corporation, asked the passengers to trasfer to an incoming train for safety. This is increasing the doubts that they will not be able to get the project which is about construting new bullet trains in the US or Brazil. >>correct However, the manager of getting the projecting said they are confident to make it since they can get trust opening their weakness instead of hiding it. >>However, the manager in charge of getting the project said they are confident to make it since they can get trust by opening their weakness instead of hiding it. My concern is that they are still running the trains so far. >> correct