a busy weekend.

2010-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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My boyfriend and I met all weekend especally for our 4th aniversary. So we had a busy and happy weekend. We could't met on all weekend usally I told you he was very busy. Fortunately last weekend, his laboratory had a blackout. As soon as he heard that news he asked me a date. wow~~ We went to the shopping mall for present and ate a steak in fancy restaurant. and saturday, I was invited his father's birthday party. and sunday, we went to the zoo. But acually we almost fight in yesterday. we were very sensitive because of exhaustion. And we felt It is very important not only dating but also rest. We can play all weekend any more. We are not teenager. But don't worry lei~~ We made up with each other soon thanks to delicious sushi.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Wow!!! So it's you 4th anniversary. Congratulations!!! I am so happy for you. No [이름]der why your boyfriend wants to marry you soon. Love love love ha ha, See you on Wednesday!!! Lei J   My boyfriend and I met all weekend especally for our 4th aniversary.>>My boyfriend and I spent the whole weekend together for our 4th anniversary.So we had a busy and happy weekend.>>correctWe could't met on all weekend usally I told you he was very busy.>>Usually, we couldn't be together the whole weekend because he was very busy.Fortunately last weekend, his laboratory had a blackout.>>correctAs soon as he heard that news he asked me a date.>>As soon as he heard about that news he asked me out for a date.wow~~>>correctWe went to the shopping mall to buy presents and ate steak in a fancy restaurant. >>correct and saturday, I was invited his father's birthday party. >>Last Saturday, I was invited for his father's birthday party. and sunday, we went to the zoo.>>and we went to the zoo on Sunday.But acually we almost fight in yesterday. >>But apparently, we almost spent the whole day fighting yesterday. we were very sensitive because of exhaustion.>>correctAnd we felt It is very important not only dating but also rest.>>And we realized that it is very important for us not only to date but also have some rest.We can play all weekend any more. >>We cannot play all weekend any more. We are not teenager.>>We are no longer teenagers.But don't worry lei~~>>correctWe made up with each other soon thanks to delicious sushi. >>correct

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