A chance

2012-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, Ms. [Name]! This is not nice weather now but I don’t know after lunch! In fact, this homework is so many difficult at me! In fact, writing your samples are I don’t like my mind and my style. So I’m sorry, I can’t answered you want! Anyway, if I received a chance, I want that make me younger or junior. Then, I am going to the travel around the world. I want see so many cultures and buildings, and I want meet a lot of people. So I want myself make me more profusion man. Of course I know never late yet. But if I do it now, maybe it will happen something about just a little beat. Anyway, that times are coming soon maybe~! Thank you Ma’am!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Sir Steve! Thank you for your composition today. You did your best and I really appreciate your effort. Keep it up! I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^ Hello, Ms. [Name]!>> Correct.This is not nice weather now but I don’t know after lunch!>> The weather is not so nice now, but I don\'t know if it will be better after lunch.In fact, this homework is so many difficult at me!>> In fact, this homework is very difficult for me.In fact, writing your samples are I don’t like my mind and my style.>> I don\'t know how to answer the homework you gave me.So I’m sorry, I can’t answered you want!>> I\'m sorry I can\'t answer it.Anyway, if I received a chance, I want that make me younger or junior.>> Anyway, if I wpuld have a chance, I\'d like to become younger.Then, I am going to travel around the world.>> Correct.I want see so many cultures and buildings, and I want meet a lot of people.>> I want to see so many buildings, experience so many cultures and meet a lot of people.So I want myself make me more profusion man.>> I want to be a rich man.Of course I know never late yet.>> Of course I know it\'s not yet too late.But if I do it now, maybe it will happen something about just a little beat.>> However, if I do it now, mabe somehow I can make it happenAnyway, that times are coming soon maybe~!>> Anyway, maybe that time will come soon.Thank you Ma’am! >> Correct.

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