A class leader
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Have you ever been a class leader? I haven\'t. Although I tried many times, l was never elected as a class leader. If you want to be a class leader, you have to know what you will do when you are a class leader. I thought about what I will do if I was a class leader. When you do a speech about what you will do when you are a class leader, you need fresh ideas. You need ideas that is unusual,special and reasonable.Well,let me tell you about my ideas. First, I would like to give my teacher a .minibell.I think my teacher is very tired because we are so loud and noisy.Also we could hear our teacher over the noise. So,we could be quiet.When our teacher rings the bell,we can hear the noise and quiet.Second,I would like to make a mini time-table.we use time tables in our school but in our class, there are only 2 time tables.It is a little bit tiresome to go to the back and frond of our class to see those time-table.Third,We can review the work we have done and learned.
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T. Matt
Have you ever been a class leader?
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I haven\'t.
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Although I tried many times, l was never elected as a class leader.
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If you want to be a class leader, you have to know what you will do when you are a class leader.
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I thought about what I will do if I was a class leader.
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When you do a speech about what you will do when you are a class leader, you need fresh ideas.
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You need ideas that is unusual,special and reasonable.
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Well,let me tell you about my ideas.
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First, I would like to give my teacher a .minibell.
>> First, I would like to give my teacher a mini bell.
I think my teacher is very tired because we are so loud and noisy.
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Also we could hear our teacher over the noise.
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So,we could be quiet.
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When our teacher rings the bell,we can hear the noise and quiet.
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>>When our teacher rings the bell,we can hear the noise and be quiet.
Second,I would like to make a mini time-table.
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we use time tables in our school but in our class, there are only 2 time tables.
>>We use time tables in our school but in our class, there are only 2 time tables.
It is a little bit tiresome to go to the back and frond of our class to see those time-table.
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Third,We can review the work we have done and learned.
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