a correction of a sentence
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s not guaranteed to be lost, is it okay? If we lose it, we can\'t take responsibility
In the sauna, you can take a shower and take a lower-body bath
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gina!
Thank you for your message.
Here are the corrected versions of your sentences:
1. It\'s not guaranteed to be lost, is it okay? If we lose it, we can\'t take responsibility.
>>It\'s not guaranteed that it won\'t be lost. Is that okay? If it does get lost, we won\'t be able to take responsibility.
OR >>The security of the (item) is not guaranteed. Is that okay? If it does get lost, we won\'t be able to take responsibility.
2. In the sauna, you can take a shower and take a lower-body bath.
>>In the sauna, you can take a shower and/or a lower-body bath.
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