A country where I want to visit mostly
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There are a number of places worldwide I want to visit.
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If I have to choose one place, I would prefer to live in Australia, especially near Adelaide located southernmost of Australia.
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I had been there before to get a language course when I was a university student.
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There were huge number of students from different countries, and I could learn a lot of things not only academic stuffs but also cultural things hanging around with them.
>>There were a number of students from different countries, and I could learn a lot of things not only academic stuffs but also cultural things while hanging around with them.
People living there were very kind to foreigners and always tried to help them.
>> People living there were very kind to foreigners and they were always trying to help them.
The most attractive thing is that people can see many beautiful spots around that city.
>>The most interesting thing is that people can see many beautiful spots around that city.
The Great Ocean Load connecting from Adelaide, passing through Melbourne and reaching to southeastern part of Australia, leads you to fantastic world where you imagine only in dream.
>> The Great Ocean Load connecting from Adelaide, passing through Melbourne and reaching to southeastern part of Australia, leads you to a fantastic world where you only imagine it in your dreams.
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