a crime for good cause

2020-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

I have seen a statue in front of the courthouse. She was a goddess with her eyes blindfolded and holding a scale. It`s was the goddess of justice, Decay. Because everyone is fair before the law. There is no good motive for the crime Recently, I saw the news that an illegal immigrant saved a person from the fire He was not bounded by his actions he changed his status to normal. I think that law also has a lot of circumstances. .

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep it up. See you later in class. T. Jasper

Here are your corrections: 

I have seen a statue in front of the courthouse.
>> CORRECT

She was a goddess with her eyes blindfolded and holding a scale.
>> She is a goddess with blindfolds and holding a scale.

It`s was the goddess of justice, Decay.
>> It\'s the goddess of justice, Decay.

Because everyone is fair before the law.
>> Everyone is equal before the law.

There is no good motive for the crime
>> There is no good motive for a crime.

Recently, I saw the news that an illegal immigrant saved a person from the fire
>> Recently, I saw a news about an illegal immigrant saved a person from a fire.

He was not bounded by his actions he changed his status to normal.
>> CORRECT

I think that law also has a lot of circumstances.
>> CORRECT

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