A cruel stomachache.

2017-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I had a bad stomachache.It was really painful.I can't sleep at all.So,I went to hospital at 1 a.m.I have to wait for a long time.The nurse give me a shot.But it wasn't make my stomachache well.I vomit all the things I eat at dinner.I should eat dinner slowly.The nurse give me a shot to sleep well and not painful.I can eat medicine because it was 2p.m. Because of the stomachache my mom paied more than 50dollar.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I\'m sorry to hear about this pain you had.

I\'m relieved that you\'re fine now.

I hope you have totally recovered. Continue to take your medicines.

You should be careful how you eat and what you eat.

Take care of your health.


_Teacher Dianne


I had a bad stomachache.

>> correct

>> OR: I had a terrible stomachache.

It was really painful.I can\'t sleep at all.So,I went to hospital at 1 a.m.

>> It was really painful that I couldn\'t sleep at all, so I went to the hospital at 1 a.m.

I have to wait for a long time.

>> correct

The nurse give me a shot. But it wasn\'t make my stomachache well.

>> The nurse gave me a shot, but it didn\'t make my stomachache got well.

>> or: The nurse gave me a shot, but it didn\'t make me feel better.

I vomit all the things I eat at dinner.

>> I vomited all the things I ate at dinner.

I should eat dinner slowly.

>> correct

>> Or: I should have eaten dinner slowly.

The nurse give me a shot to sleep well and not painful.

>> The nurse gave me a shot to sleep well and not to feel pain.

I can eat medicine because it was 2p.m.

>> I can take a medicine because it was 2 p.m.

Because of the stomachache my mom paied more than 50dollar.

>> And because of the stomachache, my mom paid more than 50 dollars.

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