A cruel stomachache.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I\'m sorry to hear about this pain you had.
I\'m relieved that you\'re fine now.
I hope you have totally recovered. Continue to take your medicines.
You should be careful how you eat and what you eat.
Take care of your health.
_Teacher Dianne
I had a bad stomachache.
>> correct
>> OR: I had a terrible stomachache.
It was really painful.I can\'t sleep at all.So,I went to hospital at 1 a.m.
>> It was really painful that I couldn\'t sleep at all, so I went to the hospital at 1 a.m.
I have to wait for a long time.
>> correct
The nurse give me a shot. But it wasn\'t make my stomachache well.
>> The nurse gave me a shot, but it didn\'t make my stomachache got well.
>> or: The nurse gave me a shot, but it didn\'t make me feel better.
I vomit all the things I eat at dinner.
>> I vomited all the things I ate at dinner.
I should eat dinner slowly.
>> correct
>> Or: I should have eaten dinner slowly.
The nurse give me a shot to sleep well and not painful.
>> The nurse gave me a shot to sleep well and not to feel pain.
I can eat medicine because it was 2p.m.
>> I can take a medicine because it was 2 p.m.
Because of the stomachache my mom paied more than 50dollar.
>> And because of the stomachache, my mom paid more than 50 dollars.
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