A day
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Sometimes,I wish I could do anything for a day.Have you ever thought the same way?But if I really had a day when l could do anything,what would I do? Well...my biggest wish is to have a cat.My mom and dad does not allow it but when I could do anything for a day,I could have a cat the pet shop!I will wake-up at 10Am.Then I will eat breakfast,wash and dress.It will be about 11Am.Then me,mom,and dad will go to Nabicat,a pet store that is good and near.It takes about 30 minutes.We will get a Russian Blue.Also we will get a cat toilet and some cat food.Also we can get a cat tower,when we will go home,and it will be about 1o\'clock.I will eat lunch.Then I can play for 2 hours and make slime for a hour.It will be about 4:30Pm.I\'ve always wanted to make a YouTube video,I could try it that day with our ca.Then,I would eat dinner and play a game.I would watch TV and eat delcious foods.I would play,wash and go to sleep.What would you do when you could do anything for a day? Play like me?
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Hello Rose! Here are your corrections. Please go over it. Have a good day ahead!
T. Matt
Sometimes,I wish I could do anything for a day.
>>Correct
Have you ever thought the same way?
>>Correct
But if I really had a day when l could do anything,what would I do?
>>However, if I really had a day when I could do anything, what would I do?
Well...my biggest wish is to have a cat.
>>Correct
>>Well, my biggest wish is to have a cat.
My mom and dad does not allow it but when I could do anything for a day,I could have a cat the pet shop!
>>My mom and dad does not allow it, but when I could do anything for a day, I could have a cat from the pet shop!
I will wake-up at 10Am.
>>I will wake-up at 10 AM.
Then I will eat breakfast,wash and dress.
>>Then I will eat breakfast, wash and dress.
>>Then I will eat breakfast, wash and get dressed.
It will be about 11Am.
>> It will be about 11 AM.
Then me,mom,and dad will go to Nabicat,a pet store that is good and near.
>> Then me, mom, and dad will go to Nabicat, a good pet store that is near.
It takes about 30 minutes.
>>Correct
We will get a Russian Blue.
>>Correct
Also we will get a cat toilet and some cat food.
>>We will also get a cat toilet and some cat food.
Also we can get a cat tower,when we will go home,and it will be about 1o\'clock.
>>Also, we can get a cat tower and it will be about 1 o\' clock when we will go home.
>> We can also get a cat tower. It will be about 1 o\' clock when we will go home.
I will eat lunch.
>>Correct
Then I can play for 2 hours and make slime for a hour.
>>Then, I can play for 2 hours and make slime for an hour.
It will be about 4:30Pm.
>> It will be about 4:30 PM.
I\'ve always wanted to make a YouTube video,I could try it that day with our ca.
>>I\'ve always wanted to make a YouTube video. I could try it that day with our cat.
Then,I would eat dinner and play a game.
>>Then, I would eat dinner and play a game.
I would watch TV and eat delcious foods.
>>I would watch TV and eat delicious foods.
I would play,wash and go to sleep.
>>I would play, wash and go to sleep.
What would you do when you could do anything for a day?
>>Correct
Play like me?
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