A decision that you have disagreed with
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I had made a many decisions that I have disagreed with.
>> There were many decisions that I disagreed with.
But when I had stopped regreting, just tried to do them, It gave me a good results.
>> However, when I stopped regretting those decisions and tried to embrace them, it gave me good results.
one of them is decision to going to study chinese in university.
>> One of them is the decision to study Chinese in college.
when I just started studying chinese, I didn\'t want to go China, and didn\'t know how to speak chinese.
>> In the beginning, I didn\'t want to go China and I didn\'t know how to speak Chinese.
So I wasn\'t intersted in studying chinese, didn\'t study hard.
>> I didn\'t study hard because I was not interested in the subject.
But at that time I had no choice so I had to study chinese.
>> But at that time, I had no choice so I had to study Chinese.
As time goes by, China became the country that I most love.
>> As time went by, China became the country that I most love.
And My chinese skills highly improved.
>> My skills in speaking Chinese have greatly improved.
I think that I don\'t know whether a decision that I made is good or not at first.
>> I think that I will never know whether a decision I make is good or not at first.
After I tried to do what I decided to do, I can sure that it is good for me or not.
>> I will only know what is good for me after I implement the decision.
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