A dog that helps people.

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It is true that many dogs are helping people.

>> It is true that many dogs help people.
Hoewever, I have no experience see dogs that help people.

>> However, I have no experience in seeing dogs that help people.
I think, the phenomenon is a problem becuase Korea isn’t good place for people who have phycial disorders.

>> I think this can pose a problem because Korea isn’t a good place for people who have physical disorders.
If I can see the dogs often, it means people who have physical disorders can go out easily.

>> If I see these dogs often, it would mean that people who have physical disorders could easily go out.
But I can’t.

>> However, I don\'t.

Of course, trained dogs are really helpful.

>> Correct
They help people in many ways like finding drugs and boms and helping blinded people.

>> They help people in many ways like finding drugs and bombs and helping blind people.
It may hard to the dogs that devote their lives, so i think it is really thanksful.

>> It may be hard for the dogs to devote their lives, so i think people should be grateful.