A extreame sport

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I haven\'t done extreme sports.

>> I haven\'t done any extreme sport.
However, if I have a chance, I want to try extreme sports.

>> Correct
There are many things that I want to do like sky diving, paragliding.

>> There are many things that I want to do like sky diving and paragliding.
I can enjoy some extreme sports in Korea.

>> Correct
I should try to do as soon as possible.

>> I should try to do them as soon as possible.