a face massage
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Today, I got a face massage with my mother.
Because there are many pimples on my face, I have to do something to relieve those troubles.
First of all, I washed my face with a soap.
And then, I scrubed the face with a massage cream.
After that, I grinded a cucumber and put it on the face.
Actually I dislike the cucumber flavor.
However, I had a cucumber massage because it made my face more bright and clear.
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Thanks for dropping by. Let's talk about that in our class tomorrow.
~teacher Faye
Today, I got a face massage with my mother.
>>CORRECT JBecause there are many pimples on my face, I have to do something to relieve those troubles.
>>CORRECT JFirst of all, I washed my face with a soap.
>>CORRECT J
>>First of all, I washed my face with soap.And then, I scrubed the face with a massage cream.
>>And then, I scrubbed my face with a massage cream.After that, I grinded a cucumber and put it on the face.
>>After that, I ground a cucumber and put it on my face.Actually I dislike the cucumber flavor.
>>CORRECT JHowever, I had a cucumber massage because it made my face more bright and clear.
>>However, I had a cucumber massage because it made my face brighter and clearer.
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