A FACINATING DISCOVERY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh, my. I went to Chungdahm the english academy for the first time yesterday, and I FOUND OUT THE AMAZING SECRET to the detective crime-solving progress. THEY HAVE UNIMAGINABLE THINGS they have used secretly from year 2001 and up to now!!! They have used smartphones that looks like plain portable telephones, sound recorders that look like ear phones and vedio cameras that can be planted secretly into spectacles. AND THEY HAVE USED THIS UNTIL NOW?! So sneaky... those famous detectives. THEY changed MY lives completely, not the CRIMINAL\'S lives. ╰( ‵□′)╯But that OK. Criminals gone, me newer.（＾∀＾● )
강사 첨삭
Good day, Heather! Great to know that you still find fascinating things unexpectedly anywhere you go. You also know how to appreciate even just small things. Keep that attitude. You stay safe. I will see you in class. ~ T. Lyn
Oh, my.
>>Oh my gosh!
I went to Chungdahm the english academy for the first time yesterday, and I FOUND OUT THE AMAZING SECRET to the detective crime-solving progress.
>>Yesterday, I went to Chungdahm English Academy for the first time and learned the surprising secret behind the criminal investigation process.
THEY HAVE UNIMAGINABLE THINGS they have used secretly from year 2001 and up to now!!!
>>They have been secretly using some unimaginable or unexpected things since 2001 to present.
They have used smartphones that looks like plain portable telephones, sound recorders that look like ear phones and vedio cameras that can be planted secretly into spectacles.
>>They have been using smartphones that look like ordinary cell phones, recorders that look like earphones, and video cameras that can be secretly plugged into glasses.
AND THEY HAVE USED THIS UNTIL NOW?!
>>And they are still using these gadgets until now.
So sneaky... those famous detectives.
>>Those famous detectives are so sneaky and cunning.
THEY changed MY lives completely, not the CRIMINAL\'S lives.
>>They completely changed my life, but not the criminals\' lives.
But that OK.
>>But that is okay.
Criminals gone, me newer.
>>The criminals are now gone and I am newer.
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