A false excuse

2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think, most people have experiecnces when they gave a false excuse to get out of something. In my case, when I was a middle school student, sometimes I didn\'t want to go a private institution. In Korea, many students go to a private institution to learn something like math and foreign language. Whenever I didn\'t want to go there, I usually told my mother ” I am sick.”. And I had to play a sick person.My voice was down, and I had to look bad. Whenever I played that I felt so nervous because if my mother realize that I told a false excuse, I had to go a private institutions. And I am so sad because I can\'t do that anymore.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I would prefer if you use direct and clear sentences.

You make more mistakes when you try to make your sentences longer.

Always keep it simple to get your point across.^^

~~Teacher Sharon

I think, most people have experiecnces when they gave a false excuse to get out of something.

>> I think that most people have the experience of giving false excuses to get out of something.
 In my case, when I was a middle school student, sometimes I didn\'t want to go a private institution.

>> In my case, when I was a middle school student, sometimes I didn\'t want to go to a private institution.
In Korea, many students go to a private institution to learn something like math and foreign language.

>> In Korea, many students go to a private institution to learn something like Math and foreign languages.
 Whenever I didn\'t want to go there, I usually told my mother ” I am sick.”.

>>  Whenever I didn\'t want to go there, I usually told my mother that I was sick.
And I had to play a sick person.

>> I had to pretend that I was sick.

My voice was down, and I had to look bad.

>> I kept my voice down and made myself look bad.
Whenever I played that I felt so nervous because if my mother realize that I told a false excuse, I had to go a private institutions.

>> I was always nervous when I did that because my mother might find out the truth and I have to go to the private institution.
 And I am so sad because I can\'t do that anymore.

>> I\'m so sad now because I can\'t do that anymore.

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