A few extra hours in a day
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day? For me, I have things to do. First, I will play a computer game. The league of legends. It is the famous game in Korea. Second, I will watch lots of things in Netflix.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
For me, I have things to do.
>> Correct
OR >> As for me, I have plans.
First, I will play a computer game. The league of legends.
>> First, I will play a computer game, League of Legends.
It is the famous game in Korea.
>> It\'s a famous game in Korea.
Second, I will watch lots of things in Netflix
>> Correct
OR>> Second, I will watch a lot of content on Netflix.
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