a friend

2017-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

학생이 쓴 원문

One of my best friend will go to work at Vietnam next month. he would stay at least 2 years, or live there such a long time. I'm afraid I won't be able to meet him for a while. He was a very active and adventurous man once. he likes to go to trip very much. I've been many countries with him, such as India, China, some European countries, Turkey, so I could go through various situation. Eating with strange foreigner, Staying at a tent on the center of dessert, hitchhiking in the surburb of the turkey. All of things I've experienced with him. Sometimes I felt embarrased as he is such a hasty person. He would lose his stuff often. We went to airport to take a airplane to London for the first time. he found that he missed his ticket when he arrived at airport. I just boarded the plane alone, he took an another plane the next day. Anyway I feel sad that he will go.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름]!!
I feel sad to hear about your best friend\'s departure to Vietnam. I hope that he will have a great life while in Vietnam. I also experienced the same way, what I did to cope is to always remember that he will always have a bright future on the path he have chosen. Anyway technology is around so it won\'t be a problem for you to communicate with your friend!!
Happy weekend!!

~Teacher Megan~

One of my best friend will go to work at Vietnam next month.
>> One of my best friend will work in Vietnam next month.

he would stay at least 2 years, or live there such a long time.
>> He would stay there for at least 2 years or live there for a longer time.

I\'m afraid I won\'t be able to meet him for a while.
>> Correct.

He was a very active and adventurous man once. he likes to go to trip very much.
>> He was a very active and adventurous man. He likes to go to trip very much.

I\'ve been many countries with him, such as India, China, some European countries, Turkey, so I could go through various situation.
>> I\'ve been in many countries with him, such as India, China, Turkey and some European countries.

Eating with strange foreigner, Staying at a tent on the center of dessert, hitchhiking in the surburb of the turkey.
>> Eating with strange foreigner, staying at a tent on the center of the dessert, hitchhiking in the surburb of the turkey.

All of things I\'ve experienced with him. Sometimes I felt embarrased as he is such a hasty person.
>> Correct.

He would lose his stuff often.
>> He would often lose his stuff.

We went to airport to take a airplane to London for the first time.
>> We went to the an airplane to London for the first time.

he found that he missed his ticket when he arrived at airport. I just boarded the plane alone, he took an another plane the next day.
>> he found out that he missed his ticket when he arrived at the airport. I just the plane alone, he took an another plane the next day.

Anyway I feel sad that he will go.
>> Anyway, I feel sad that he have to go to Vietnam.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기