A good ads?
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Many people mention that good advertisement have to be simple, impressive, and touched.
Moreover experts says that good design makes good advertisement.
I am guessing What is the best essential factor in a good advertisement.
I think the above mentioned elements are absolutely important.
However it is more important that people have faith in products than any other factor.
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Many people mention that good advertisement have to be simple, impressive, and touched.
>> Many people mention that good advertisements have to be simple, impressive, and touching.
Moreover experts says that good design makes good advertisement.
Moreover experts says that good design makes good advertisement.
>> Moreover, experts say that good design makes good advertisement.
I am guessing What is the best essential factor in a good advertisement.
I am guessing What is the best essential factor in a good advertisement.
>> I am guessing that it is the most essential factor in a good advertisement.
I think the above mentioned elements are absolutely important.
I think the above mentioned elements are absolutely important.
>> I think the abovementioned elements are absolutely important.
However it is more important that people have faith in products than any other factor.
However it is more important that people have faith in products than any other factor.
>> Correct
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