A good dancer
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think it is important whether people are good at dancing or not.
In my opinion, a good dancer is a person who does his best to practice dance and enjoys it a lot.
Then a bad dancer is someone who doesn\'t practice and enjoy it.
I think that the ground for dancing is instinct. Therefore, everyone likes to dance.
Of course it will be differences in how much people like dancing.
강사 첨삭
H[이름]!
I can definitely see that you are a very solid writer.
You have started your composition beautifully.
You are consistent in your style, too.
We\'ll do our best to apply this talent in your speaking as well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think it is important whether people are good at dancing or not.
>> Correct
In my opinion, a good dancer is a person who does his best to practice dance and enjoys it a lot.
In my opinion, a good dancer is a person who does his best to practice dance and enjoys it a lot.
>> Correct
Then a bad dancer is someone who doesn\'t practice and enjoy it.
Then a bad dancer is someone who doesn\'t practice and enjoy it.
>> On the other hand, a bad dancer is someone who doesn\'t practice and just enjoys it.
I think that the ground for dancing is instinct.
I think that the ground for dancing is instinct.
>> I think that the basis for dancing is instinct.
Therefore, everyone likes to dance.
>> Correct
Of course it will be differences in how much people like dancing.
Of course it will be differences in how much people like dancing.
>> Of course, there would be a difference in how much people like dancing.
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